Write Campaign First Challenge
Here are the rules of the first challenge for the Write Campaign.
Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “The door swung open.”
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), use the same beginning words and end with the words: "the door swung shut."
For those who want an even greater challenge, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!
If you watched the video in my last post you KNOW I took both of the extra challanges.
Nerd power!!!
Between The Rock and A Hard Place
The door swung open, completing its dramatic arch and return, then slamming closed in her face. So much for slinking in unnoticed. Gingerly she tested the end of her nose, relieved when it did not wheeze like an accordion. The wood grain was quite lovely up close.
In the long second before kissing oak, she’d glimpsed him sitting on the white couch surrounded by family, friends, their friends, and their friend’s friends. On the side table right next to all the solidarity-lay her traitorous purse and keys.
Not a sound came from the other side of the door. She imagined them all staring at it, well-dressed rabbits frozen in social horror. It wasn’t the first time she’d brought the room to silence that night.
“Will you marry me?”
“No.”
Leaving two choices - walk the twenty miles of wooded road alone, in heels, in the dark or walk back into that room. Could she hide in the bathroom until they went to bed? She sensed movement on the other side and the door cracked open. A hand appeared with her purse dangling between the fingers like a dead rodent. She grabbed it and ran.
Behind her the door swung shut.
Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “The door swung open.”
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), use the same beginning words and end with the words: "the door swung shut."
For those who want an even greater challenge, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!
If you watched the video in my last post you KNOW I took both of the extra challanges.
Nerd power!!!
Between The Rock and A Hard Place
The door swung open, completing its dramatic arch and return, then slamming closed in her face. So much for slinking in unnoticed. Gingerly she tested the end of her nose, relieved when it did not wheeze like an accordion. The wood grain was quite lovely up close.
In the long second before kissing oak, she’d glimpsed him sitting on the white couch surrounded by family, friends, their friends, and their friend’s friends. On the side table right next to all the solidarity-lay her traitorous purse and keys.
“Will you marry me?”
“No.”
Leaving two choices - walk the twenty miles of wooded road alone, in heels, in the dark or walk back into that room. Could she hide in the bathroom until they went to bed? She sensed movement on the other side and the door cracked open. A hand appeared with her purse dangling between the fingers like a dead rodent. She grabbed it and ran.
Behind her the door swung shut.
Comments
Great job, Kate! :)
P.S. I'm a fellow beginning blogger and looking forward to reading more.
If it was me, I think I'd walk...:-)
I'm a fellow campaigner - I'm not in your groups, but I wanted the fun of getting to know more writers. It's so great to meet you! And I love the title of your blog!
Fellow campaigner dropping by to say hello.
Love this flash piece, particularly the sentence about the wood grain! Also a great concept.
Claire
And a fellow Seattleite, to boot...maybe we'll connect in person one of these days?